More developments!

 Upon discussion with our media teacher, he told us to make a few changes to our script like first establishing the stalker and showing a little background as to why he may want to stalk the girl. Also giving insight into his room and what it's like to be a stalker. Secondly, instead of doing a kidnapping scene with a car we decided to keep it simple and show the girl cycling alone when the stalker approaches her and she stops to respond but the stalker attacks her and the girl takes out a knife and holds it upto the stalker's neck instead. This was done to add a positive touch in the film and challenge conventions as usually men are the one's who attack and become dominant over women.

FINALISED SCRIPT